Great Form

 In my in class essay Ire read and decided to write about the chapter " Great Form" although it was a very short chapter it was very thorough. Tim O'Brien explained why he enjoyed writing story truth from happening truth. He even gives examples of the same situation written in story truth and it written in happening truth. By this chapter I could see where Tim O'Brien was coming from when he likes story truth better then the happening truth because as Tim O'Brien says " I want you to feel what I felt." and that's what he does with the story truth, he is able to make you feel something with the story truth other then the happening truth.

Proposal

The essay I plan on expanding is essay four, which analyzed hauling videos and how it's positive outcomes for the viewers, the YouTuber, and the company being marketed in the video.  I selected this essay for expansion because I feel like this is the subject I know the most about and  feel like I could go in depth a lot easier in this essay then I could in any others. To expand I plan on using maybe two more YouTubers as an example because in the first paper I only used one. I also plan using examples of the deals the viewers get by watching these videos such as a sale price or sometimes even a chance to win the exact same piece of clothing or accessory as the YouTuber who filmed the video. I also plan on researching how these hauling videos help the company featured in these videos.

Key Terms:

• Zoellas YouTube Videos (more examples of haulers)
• How does hauling videos benefit companies
• Positive effects of Hauling Videos
• Deals YouTubers get from companies
• Why have hauling videos become a huge epidemic